http://whistlingfire.com/2009/12/24/tea-and-curry/ The Whistling Fire is an open forum where fresh voices can share creative works in progress. Fri, 03 Feb 2012 21:26:21 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ http://whistlingfire.com/2009/12/24/tea-and-curry/#comment-191 Mon, 28 Dec 2009 23:23:11 +0000 http://whistlingfire.com/?p=542#comment-191 I enjoy Simona’s poem “Tea and Curry”. I feel the first line is not necessary to the rest of the poem as what transpires between the lovers contributes to the ending of their relationship. The summary line at the beginning was not as subtle and discrete as the rest. Thanks.

]]> http://whistlingfire.com/2009/12/24/tea-and-curry/#comment-190 Mon, 28 Dec 2009 23:14:35 +0000 http://whistlingfire.com/?p=542#comment-190 The poem is an immediate experience. Thank you.

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