http://whistlingfire.com/2009/07/07/body-electric/ The Whistling Fire is an open forum where fresh voices can share creative works in progress. Fri, 03 Feb 2012 21:26:21 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ http://whistlingfire.com/2009/07/07/body-electric/#comment-130 Mon, 19 Oct 2009 11:55:54 +0000 http://whistlingfire.com/2009/07/07/body-electric/#comment-130 intelligent poem.especially the use of electric charge from a lightning bolt and combining it with the electric sensation between human bodies.i may be wrong but its related to sexuality right?well written poem!if you could explain the last two lines that would be perfect.i have an explanation but it may be wrong!!keep writing!!

]]> http://whistlingfire.com/2009/07/07/body-electric/#comment-77 Fri, 07 Aug 2009 09:31:53 +0000 http://whistlingfire.com/2009/07/07/body-electric/#comment-77 MeLaina, I absolutely love your writing.

]]> http://whistlingfire.com/2009/07/07/body-electric/#comment-61 Thu, 09 Jul 2009 14:24:17 +0000 http://whistlingfire.com/2009/07/07/body-electric/#comment-61 A stirring poem, MeLaina, sombre and inviting.
The use of “cold steel” took me away from the poem as it is a rather conventional metaphor in an otherwise imaginative setting.

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