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	<title>Comments on: Black Sheep Sings (Excerpt)</title>
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		<title>By: OneGirlRiot</title>
		<link>http://whistlingfire.com/2009/02/25/blacksheepsings/#comment-1153</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 05 May 2011 23:29:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[All these comments and it never occurred to me to ANSWER! I am so sorry. 

Thank you, Bryan, for your detailed comments.  I am revising my rough draft with them in mind.

Bless you all for your encouraging words. Writing my story has been a daunting process, and hearing from readers gives me courage to keep going.

Thank you.

Stacy]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>All these comments and it never occurred to me to ANSWER! I am so sorry. </p>
<p>Thank you, Bryan, for your detailed comments.  I am revising my rough draft with them in mind.</p>
<p>Bless you all for your encouraging words. Writing my story has been a daunting process, and hearing from readers gives me courage to keep going.</p>
<p>Thank you.</p>
<p>Stacy</p>
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		<title>By: Chuck E</title>
		<link>http://whistlingfire.com/2009/02/25/blacksheepsings/#comment-556</link>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 19 Jun 2010 18:31:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Stacy - 

WOW....don&#039;t know what to say. I had no idea. Powerful doesn&#039;t even come close. I can&#039;t wait to read more.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Stacy &#8211; </p>
<p>WOW&#8230;.don&#8217;t know what to say. I had no idea. Powerful doesn&#8217;t even come close. I can&#8217;t wait to read more.</p>
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		<title>By: jimhorrell</title>
		<link>http://whistlingfire.com/2009/02/25/blacksheepsings/#comment-283</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 21 Jan 2010 22:32:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Stacy,

Thank you for inviting us into your world.  By sharing your experience and your feelings through your chosen words you have given the reader a taste of what it is like to be in your shoes, even if only for a short time.  

Even though there are billions of people on Earth, the birth of a child, in my opinion, is still an incredible miracle.  I am a father to a child with special needs.  Our son, Matthew, was born with a serious congenital heart defect.  His diagnosis was Pulmonary Atresia with VSD.  He also has ADHD and allergies.  To date, our son has undergone 5 heart surgeries as well as other non-cardiac operations.  Matthew is 15 now.  As I look back at his early childhood years when he was so very sick, and spending nights on the couch holding him close because we were so afraid that he would stop breathing or his heart would cease beating, I learned how precious life truly is.

I love how at the end of the piece, your best friend Jill gives a different perspective.  Even though you went through much emotional and physical pain, Jill points out the fact that your baby can be a blessing to someone else.  That is a very powerful thought, and I am glad you included it.

Take care and God bless you,

Jim]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Stacy,</p>
<p>Thank you for inviting us into your world.  By sharing your experience and your feelings through your chosen words you have given the reader a taste of what it is like to be in your shoes, even if only for a short time.  </p>
<p>Even though there are billions of people on Earth, the birth of a child, in my opinion, is still an incredible miracle.  I am a father to a child with special needs.  Our son, Matthew, was born with a serious congenital heart defect.  His diagnosis was Pulmonary Atresia with VSD.  He also has ADHD and allergies.  To date, our son has undergone 5 heart surgeries as well as other non-cardiac operations.  Matthew is 15 now.  As I look back at his early childhood years when he was so very sick, and spending nights on the couch holding him close because we were so afraid that he would stop breathing or his heart would cease beating, I learned how precious life truly is.</p>
<p>I love how at the end of the piece, your best friend Jill gives a different perspective.  Even though you went through much emotional and physical pain, Jill points out the fact that your baby can be a blessing to someone else.  That is a very powerful thought, and I am glad you included it.</p>
<p>Take care and God bless you,</p>
<p>Jim</p>
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		<title>By: coffeepercolator</title>
		<link>http://whistlingfire.com/2009/02/25/blacksheepsings/#comment-89</link>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Sep 2009 15:51:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Hi Stacy
I think you have very powerful writing indeed, with strong imagery and tight rhythmic control over both your sentences and dramatic content. Hopefully we will see more of this in the future.

Cheers,
Andrew]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Stacy<br />
I think you have very powerful writing indeed, with strong imagery and tight rhythmic control over both your sentences and dramatic content. Hopefully we will see more of this in the future.</p>
<p>Cheers,<br />
Andrew</p>
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		<title>By: Memoir-writing issues &#171; Onegirlriot&#8217;s Blog</title>
		<link>http://whistlingfire.com/2009/02/25/blacksheepsings/#comment-48</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Memoir-writing issues &#171; Onegirlriot&#8217;s Blog]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 18 May 2009 08:30:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: Onegirlriot&#8217;s Blog</title>
		<link>http://whistlingfire.com/2009/02/25/blacksheepsings/#comment-47</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 18 May 2009 05:40:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[[...] Memoir excerpt Possibly related posts: (automatically generated)Hey Mom!Birth was the easy part.Post at fMhMy last post at BabyCenter &#8211; Goodbye! [...]]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] Memoir excerpt Possibly related posts: (automatically generated)Hey Mom!Birth was the easy part.Post at fMhMy last post at BabyCenter &#8211; Goodbye! [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Wychkraft</title>
		<link>http://whistlingfire.com/2009/02/25/blacksheepsings/#comment-44</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 06 May 2009 12:51:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[POWERFUL, descriptive &amp; intrusive... Stacy your &quot;Black Sheep Sings (Excerpt)&quot; is wonderful... So rarely do I have imagery dancing for so long as what your words invoked.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>POWERFUL, descriptive &amp; intrusive&#8230; Stacy your &#8220;Black Sheep Sings (Excerpt)&#8221; is wonderful&#8230; So rarely do I have imagery dancing for so long as what your words invoked.</p>
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		<title>By: Tiffany</title>
		<link>http://whistlingfire.com/2009/02/25/blacksheepsings/#comment-28</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Tiffany]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 17 Apr 2009 19:27:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[This piece hit me in two ways:
1. This is truly wonderful writing
2. I am now scared shitless to give birth]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This piece hit me in two ways:<br />
1. This is truly wonderful writing<br />
2. I am now scared shitless to give birth</p>
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		<title>By: drutt</title>
		<link>http://whistlingfire.com/2009/02/25/blacksheepsings/#comment-14</link>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 15 Mar 2009 20:54:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Oh my goodness.  You write beautifully, Stacy.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh my goodness.  You write beautifully, Stacy.</p>
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		<title>By: Dorian</title>
		<link>http://whistlingfire.com/2009/02/25/blacksheepsings/#comment-12</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Dorian]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 14 Mar 2009 16:07:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I could feel this viscerally. I did not want to finish reading it because it so perfectly brings the reader into the moment and into that hospital room. I cant wait to read more.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I could feel this viscerally. I did not want to finish reading it because it so perfectly brings the reader into the moment and into that hospital room. I cant wait to read more.</p>
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