http://whistlingfire.com/2009/02/22/a-metaphor-for-my-participation-in-global-warming/ The Whistling Fire is an open forum where fresh voices can share creative works in progress. Wed, 08 Feb 2012 02:11:13 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ http://whistlingfire.com/2009/02/22/a-metaphor-for-my-participation-in-global-warming/#comment-8 Thu, 26 Feb 2009 17:19:51 +0000 http://whistlingfire.com/?p=43#comment-8 David – Thanks so much for submitting to The Whistling Fire. I really like this poem. I’m wondering how a line break would seem inserted between “…flow of ice. / / I made a suit…” and perhaps another one at: “…little body. // Today he looks…”
Just a thought. – Bryan

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